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I went back and forth between making this a normal drabble or putting sneezing in it. Finally went with the sneezing. But, yeah, it also started out as Aya/Yohji. This really surprised me while I was writing it :-)

Title: Snow Drabble 1
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Weiss Kreuz
Rating: R?
Pairings: Aya/Yohji, Ken/Omi
Disclaimer: Whoo boy. They're so very, very not mine!
Summary: Excuses, excuses, excuses… and a little playfulness
Word count: 500
Notes: I had a snow day today (2/24/05), and couldn't resist writing some snow drabbles


Snow Drabble 1

The snow came down more heavily and more steadily. It had begun with light flurries, but by mid-morning there was significant accumulation. Their clientele had slowly thinned over the course of the morning and they hadn't had a customer in twenty minutes. It was a rarity to have the shop so empty when all four men were working.

Aya dropped his apron onto the counter. "Going upstairs," he announced flatly. "I trust you can close up without me." Then, without waiting for an answer, he turned and headed out.

Yohji raised an eyebrow and could not keep his eyes from following the man out, fixed on Aya's rear. Quickly, he untied his own apron, eager to follow. There had been absolutely no hint in Aya's voice, and no look exchanged between them. But the lack of hints coupled with Aya's sudden fleeing was enough to convey the message.

"Where do you think you're going?" Ken asked Yohji, hands on his hips. Swiftly he moved in front of the doorway, preventing Yohji's escape. "You'd better not be leaving, too."

"I…" Yohji rubbed a hand against the back of his neck. "I'm not feeling so well. Nose is a little tickly and throat's a little sore. I'd better go," he reasoned.

"Aww, poor Yohji-kun!" Omi cooed sympathetically, looking at Yohji over the flowers he was loading into crates. "You go up to bed. Ken and I will finish."

"Omi!" Ken exclaimed, but Omi waved Yohji on, and the older man took the excuse to go. When alone together, Ken sighed. "He's not really sick, you know. Just using it as an excuse to get into bed with Aya. Do you really want to encourage that?"

Omi cocked his head. "It's a snow day. Let them have some fun. Aya's always so restless when we're snowed in. I thought it'd be a good idea." He finished loading the flowers and walked towards the back room where the walk-in cooler was located. "Besides," he said, pausing in the doorway to give Ken a good view of the bow tying up his apron in the back. "I'm feeling a little cold coming on myself. Want to warm me up?"

Ken paused, then eagerly followed the man into the cooler. Once the flowers had been safely put away, Ken pressed his front to Omi's back and slid his hands beneath Omi's apron from behind. He kissed the back of Omi's neck. Omi begin sniffling. He undid Omi's pants and Omi reacted by sneezing.

"ehhChihhh!"

"You're going to actually catch cold at this rate," Ken chuckled, his breath a warm cloud in the cold air.

"Th-that's fine," said Omi, partially undressed, shivering and pressed against the cold metal wall. "J-just means you'll have to take me upstairs to b-b-bed when we're done here."

Ken laughed and unzipped his jeans with one hand while reaching up with the other and rubbing it against Omi's nose. Then he moved it down to touch more of Omi beneath the apron.



:-)

Date: 2005-02-25 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schtiel.livejournal.com
Teehee, Aya... LMAO Sorry, had to fangirl.

AWWN! This was so adorable! I love Omi's sneeze, that soo sounded like him (I've been writing this duel fic with another with Shuldich and Aya, and I've have the damnedest time finding his perfect sound). *squee* Yay for WK fics!! :D I'm glad you got bit with the snow-bunny for this. ^_^ Was VERY cute!

Date: 2005-02-25 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schtiel.livejournal.com
I know just what you mean, and you have to go where the fic takes you, I'm just tooooo much of his fangirl, it's so funny. LOL This was omg too cute, and sooo adorable.

I so agree to that! I sadly haven't gotten into writing for the other characters, only centered around Aya, Schuldich and Brad for some reason, using the others as a back-up or something.

LMAO! That's weird for it's my favorite to slash usually. I'm a sucker for angst, I suppose and that just makes it easier? Could be. Hehe. I dunno, I can be versital if I like the pairing. LMAO Sum it up, I'm weird about pairings. XD And thank you, I hope you do too! :D

Oh man! I wanted to write that ty forever and it was sooo long and I kept coming back and writing more and then I clicked out and lost it like a goober. ROFL And thank you! I now can be all goofy online once more. ^_^

Date: 2005-02-25 12:48 pm (UTC)
iff: (hyde-coffee)
From: [personal profile] iff
*wibble* That's about all I'm coherent enough to say about this 'cause you melted me in to a puddle of happygoo. (I'll have to write more coherent feedback when I'm a bit more awake and have resolidified. ^_~ )

Date: 2005-02-25 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silly-sooze.livejournal.com
^___^ ribbit.
pretty pudding pancake pie sweet. ummmm.
now I want to get to know Weiss Kreuz. where can I find episodes? dvd's maybe even?

Date: 2005-02-26 04:03 am (UTC)
iff: Asexual Dreamsheep (Default)
From: [personal profile] iff
Oh, Weiß is lovely. Four boys living together over a flower shop, florists by day, assassins by night, add a bit of the supernatural (especially in the assassin team that they're usually up against, also quite pretty), and a whole lot of angst, and mmmmm. It was released in the US as "Knight Hunters" about a year ago. I'll warn you that the animation is rough (I think they used all their budget on the voice actors) and sometimes the stories get just plain silly (I still can't believe that Koyasu put a tentacle monster in. If it wasn't for one word at the end that sets a whole lot of plot in motion, I'd make everyone skip that ep.), but it's worth it.

The second series (Glühen, it's being released in the US now, or maybe they've put the last DVD out already?, as "Knight Hunters: Eternity") came out about a year and a half ago and had much better animation but the character designs were changed drastically (copyright issues) and lots of people have problems with the new character designs (although they grew on me rather quickly).

Date: 2005-02-26 04:10 am (UTC)
iff: (In the City of Glass -- HUGS)
From: [personal profile] iff
Okay...beyond the wibbling and melting...*grin*

I love how well you've got their voices down! Aya storming off without an explanation, Yohji embarrassed about being caught running off to get some and fibbing so that he'll be allowed to get away with it...I could totally hear it. The 'I'm not nearly as innocent as I seem' that Omi does ("Want to warm me up?") is perfect! And oh, the thought of Ken taking care of a sick Omi is just so...yum. The fact that it was supposed to be an AyaXYohji fic had me laughing. I love when the muses decide to go off in directions that you really hadn't planned on. Thank you again!

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Contents of this journal include: sneeze fetish references and lots of hurt/comfort, short fics and/or WIPS, everything from gen and het to slash and femslash, everything from G to NC-17, random ramblings about my life and fandom obsessions.

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