Date: 2005-02-26 04:10 am (UTC)
iff: (In the City of Glass -- HUGS)
From: [personal profile] iff
Okay...beyond the wibbling and melting...*grin*

I love how well you've got their voices down! Aya storming off without an explanation, Yohji embarrassed about being caught running off to get some and fibbing so that he'll be allowed to get away with it...I could totally hear it. The 'I'm not nearly as innocent as I seem' that Omi does ("Want to warm me up?") is perfect! And oh, the thought of Ken taking care of a sick Omi is just so...yum. The fact that it was supposed to be an AyaXYohji fic had me laughing. I love when the muses decide to go off in directions that you really hadn't planned on. Thank you again!
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