12in12: Bonus 1 for zipstermom
Jan. 6th, 2012 12:13 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tarotgal
Title: Bonus 1
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Summary: Jack notices some things about Ianto.
Note: Part of the 12 Ficlets in 12 Days project 2011-2012. Requested by zipstermom
Series: http://tgsrealm.beastlet.com/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2011/index.html
Told ya I'd squeeze it in there :-) I know it's a little short, but I hope it's close to what you wanted and that you like it! Have a most wonderful year!
Yay!
Date: 2012-01-06 05:15 pm (UTC)I really liked how you mirrored Jack and Ianto's thoughts in the story's beginning and ending. And I adored how you really nailed the dynamic here--Jack being concerned and knowledgeable without being sappy. Loved when he gave his coat to Ianto and carried him down to bed for expediency. And I truly laughed out loud at both the tongue depressor part and when Jack mistook Ianto's gesture for tissues as finding the thermometer.
I'm still smiling over this. Thanks again and best wishes for a wonderful 2012.